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As he walks through the City, a Woman in a Black Tartan Shirt and Ripped Jeans accidentally stumbles into him, she's wearing a Seljuk Band T-shirt and has Long Shaggy Hair, she worridly apologises "Oh Christ Dude I'm so sorry! I've been trying to get my Ma some food ya' see, I hope there's no trouble?"
In that moment one could notice Drum Sticks fall out of her Pocket, pretty nice ones too, they've been chipped from falling on the floor and certainly cannot be used anymore.
Hey there I don't wanna clog RMB but If someone could give that a read and tell me what you think I'd appreciate it!
Love the more grounded storytelling, you're really improving as a writer!
Look, if you had one shot or one opportunity
To seize everything you ever wanted in one moment
Would you capture it or just let it slip?
City of Neuropa / Concadia Province / The Sic semper Imperium of Plaugetopia / June 5th, 2016
Another day.
Em tries to put a spring in his step, some kind of extra energy into him, but it didn’t work, despite it being his birthday recently. He was now 19. Bundled against the morning chill, he makes his way to his work, somewhat dreading what awaits him, as he descends a flight of stairs.
Suddenly, he felt a shove at his back, sending him tumbling down the stairs, bouncing off the railing on his way and coming to a stop on the landing. Em felt an aching pain and slowly tried to stand up, noticing in shame the stares of passerby. He then felt two hands roughly hauling him to his feet, and found himself looking right at someone else’s maskless face.
The person, who was proceeding to pat off the dust that had gathered on Em’s coat, had kind brown eyes, and short dark brown hair that seemed to almost flow like a river.
“There you go,” they said, grinning like an idiot. “Now, I’ve got to run. See you!” And they took off in a dash down the alley, closely pursued by two Imperial Police officers, wielding stun batons.
Em stood there stunned for a moment, processing. Something was urging him to follow them, an instinct that came from the gut. Some may call it Destiny…
“HEY! WAIT!” He seemed to shout not of his own volition, just as he began to run without really knowing why. He followed the Police down the street, through a dense crowd of fellow masked citizens, and into an alley, where he saw the two law enforcement stopped, casting their gazes about. It was clear that the officers had lost them.
A slight movement of a window caught Em’s attention and turned it upward. Something or someone had moved away from the second floor window of the nearest apartment block. A simple fire escape connected the window to the ground. The mystery man must have somehow gotten up before the police had rounded the corner, Em thought. He started for the staircase, hoping to reach who he now deemed his “target” in a sense, but before he could do that, he heard the clipped, modulated voice of one of the Imperial Police.
“Halt, Citizen.”
Em stopped, and before his mind could even entertain the notion of resistance, he had turned around to face the officer. The man (or woman, it is hard to tell) stood as though they were staring at him for several moments. A foreigner would be unnerved by this display, but he knew that they were likely scanning him and running his biometrics through criminal databases, in case he too was a dastardly trickster like the mystery man. After those moments elapsed, the officer ever so slightly cocked their head to the side, as if to mimic some semblance of a nod.
”Identity confirmed. Move along, citizen.”
And as they walked away, Em surreptitiously moved up the stairs, and into the window.
As he entered the second-floor apartment, a shape froze on the opposite side of the room, clearly about to leave through the window. Em saw two hands raised as they turned around.
“Alright, alright you got m… oh, it’s you.”
Em cast his mask aside, feeling fresh air on his skin for the first time in… well, a long time.
“I’m Em… Em Hitozuki. Who are you?”
The mystery man seemed almost disappointed in what they seemed to consider a lame question.
“Name’s Nolano Johanssen. I guess you could call me a drifter.”
“Does drifting involve running from the law a lot?”
Nolano laughed at that, a surprisingly musical sound.
“Well, yeah… it seems that they don’t take too kindly to anti-government graffiti.”
Sensing Em’s confusion, they decided to drop it.
“Uh, anyway… don’t you have a job to go to? Police to report to? I don’t mind, really. I need an excuse to get out of this country anyhow.”
Em suddenly lurched forward, staring intently.
“Take me with you, please.”
Taken aback, Nolano says, “Uh… sure? Why don’t you get packed and meet me at the northern city limits tomorrow?”
“It’s a deal!”
They shake hands and grin at each other, and there seems to be a warm glow in the room, as though the world is smiling at this development…
One Day Later
Em had left most of his possessions behind. He didn’t need them, and wherever he was planning to go, they likely wouldn’t work. He simply had a good-sized backpack, packed with clothes, some food (mostly bread), books, and a handheld cloud-journal, a device that would take any text entered and keep it in a server for future reference via an internet transmission. As he approached one of the many exits to the city of Neuropa, he saw Nolano.
Nolano was the exact opposite of Em when it came to packing. While Em had sparse belongings, Nolano had a ridiculously large pack that seemed to strain at its seams as though even this huge pack was struggling with the sheer mass of their belongings. Most peculiar of all, Nolano seemed not to struggle at all with what should be a massive weight.
“Right then! Shall we go?” Nolano said cheerfully.
And so they did, past the gates, out of the city, and into the world. As they left, Em cast off his mask, breathing in outside air for one of the first times, and left it behind.
City of Wassertor / Tyrolen Province / The Grozzer Theokratiske Reik of Krovx Belgium / July 25th, 2016
They had trekked out from Plaugetopia, and after a few weeks, exited the country through the northeastern border. From there, they moved through the Holy Area, living off the land, and eventually, they made it to the Reik.
They were overlooking Brueskals, center of the empire, from some cliffs when Em said, “I was taught about the Reik… but I never imagined it would be like this.”
Nolano had chuckled, lit only by the distant glow of the massive city. “Yep, it’s amazing, all right. Certainly no city like it.”
And then, from Brueskals to where they were now, they prepared for the journey of a lifetime.
The two rented out a small flat on the northern end of the city, with only a few pieces of furniture and adornment. Then, they went out, buying provisions and supplies for the trek.
“Right then, let’s go over the plan one last time,” Nolano said, a day before they were set to leave.
They pointed to a map, showcasing the Reik and the bordering Northern Continent.
“We’ll leave from here early tomorrow. From there… we’ll move up the continent, to the northernmost end,” this was punctuated by a jab at that part of the map, “and set up a camp there. We’ll stay there for a while, and then maybe we’ll head back down east.” They had chosen this part of the map so they could be as uninterrupted as possible, as there were no records of civilization there, isolated or otherwise. And with that, they rested up for the big day ahead.
The next day, they set out. Hitching a ride on a ferry crossing to the Reik-controlled Exclusion Zone on the North Continent, they set out from there.
Through mountains and fields, ravines and tundras, they headed ever north. Through nations, barring themselves to the cold of the night and war, who saw them with suspicious eyes.
Eventually, according to the map, they had made it.
”Uncharted Territory” / The Northern Continent / ??? / September 15th, 2016
After a few more days of trekking, they came to a valley, nestled in the divide between a great plateau and a desert. It was getting colder, but still warm enough to camp outside, so that’s what they did.
As the fire roared to life, Em looked about, taking in the pre-dusk scenery. “This place… it’s beautiful. Uncompromising… but beautiful.”
Nolano, rummaging through their pack, nods in assent. “Oh, yeah. What say we try to climb that plateau tomorrow, see what’s at the top?”
“Sounds good…”
As they sat down, to prepare a bit of food, they didn’t notice the lights glimmering at the top of the rock…
“Ok… let’s get cookin…” Em muttered, placing a frozen pork chop onto a skillet over the fire.
Just as the meat began to sizzle, releasing its juices, 14 simultaneous sounds of metal on wood sounded all around the duo.
“What the-“ Nolano tried to start to his feet, but he found a sword at his throat, keeping him down.
Em had a sword tip to his neck as well, and found him face to face with…
“우리는 불골입니다. 여기서 무슨 일을 하려는 겁니까, 침입자여?”
The voice came from the person pointing a sword at Em, who was a woman. Em was immediately struck by how beautiful she was, before realizing how stupid it was for him to think that now of all times. She had long, reddish-black hair, and dark eyes, like pools of ink, and was clad in the same garb as the other assailants, that being a loose robe covering what seemed to be a wooden armor piece. Her expression was belligerent, but it clearly did not suit her.
But through those thoughts, Em realized something else, a fact that shocked him deeply:
He could understand what she was saying.
“I-i’m sorry - ma’am - but I don’t understand what you’re saying…” Nolano was saying, trying to reach a parlay, when Em opened his own mouth:
“나는 Em이고 이 사람은 나의 동반자 Nolano입니다. 무례하거나 침해하지 않는다는 뜻입니다.”
The assailants - or Bulgol, as the woman had called them, almost reeled in shock. It was clear that this language was exclusively spoken by this people.
It was then that they began to utter, almost as a invocation:
“선지자의 피…”
An excerpt from Em Hitozuki’s Digital Journal (Archived)
When I came out here, this is the last thing I expected… an entire Civilization here, on the North Continent, completely undiscovered! There must be close to a hundred thousand here… True, they’re nowhere near Plaugetopia’s level of advancement, but it’s impressive how far they’ve come. They’ve developed parallel inventions to our own, like electricity, in an existence almost devoid of war! Truly fascinating…
//CONTACT TRACE 125.909211 start//
//Hmm? What is it?//
//Intercepted package, text-type. Interesting details.//
//Do go on.//
//Close to 100,000 people, living in peace. Lightly armed from what I can gather. Prime.//
//Ohhh… excellent… Let us prepare, we have a bounty before us…//
//TRACE END 332.20102 STOP STOP STOP//
City of Allul'a / - Province / The Slaying Queens of Plaguetopia[/quote]
Oooh me likey. Wait, would that mean you passed through my nation that probably existed by that time? (I mean it was still in a civil war between the current government and remnants of the Sultanate but still)
Yeah, I think so. I didn't want to develop it too much since I was focusing on the destination more but I could totally expand on that later!
Been organizing a specil thing with Silvarus
Am Pròiseact Mòr
A message has been sent through private telegrams to the Silvarus, regarding Dùnachron's status in this foreign world. Our nation is weak, and from what little we have gathered about the outside world, Silvarus is also not in such a higher state either... As such, we have a proposal....
The Commonwealth of Gaidal would be a union between our nations, Dùnachron and Silvarus. It would be but a beginning of sorts, to stand together in this unknown world. We would both jointly benefit from this Commonwealth, and would be able to stand on our own two feet...
An dòchas airson do fhreagairt...
3 Hours Later
After hours of stumbling around in the dark with the only light source being chemlights and the few remaining flashlights that the group had left, as they continued the distinctive sent of fuel and oil became more stronger indicated some sort of spill. As they continued a small breeze began to form and shortly after dim light began to fill the area, the captain looked up and spotted a jagged crack and ordered two of the group members to go up and see what was on the other side.
Единство, в котором мы стоим
... Our interest is peaked. However, we do not wish for this to be the name of the newly formed nation. It should envoke power! Authority... How about, instead... Akaliska. That is the name of a Silvarusian god of fire after all. Then we will be completely on board.
A message is sent in response, one that shall influence Dùnachron's history massively..
Deal. We shall finish up the official treaty and also begin the process at your capital if that is fine. Then, it will be official.
The new banners look pretty cool. Has anyone got a full list?
NO
I'd no idea it was such top jean.
Kay and Kal Kansinini look toward each other again, communicating in their barely comprehensible tongue. Masks slightly stretching, their mouths moving without voice. Their body language seemed typically plaguetopian, loose yet firm, controlled relaxation.
“He’s offering the national sovereignty in exchange for our Industrial prowess” Kal said
Kay retorted “That is evident husband, however, it is as he said, we cannot take this deal without our percentage of a tithe, there must be mutual support in a partnership such as these. These people are not wantoneans, it is harder to easily abuse either their trust or their material.”
Kal shrugged “Perhaps it would be best to play into their strengths and pride, Agriculture remains strong in the west, despite the loss of the east, and their material culture, especially Oil, remains rich. Perhaps one of these would be sufficient, we have been in need of a breadbasket since the kreigvolk collapse. .”
Kay turned his words “He is a man in desperation, if we can play to the fact that Goslingo’s country is in a state of turmoil and decline, we can both leverage it into having it both ways, keeping a tide of Oil and Wheats. Either would pay dividends, especially to the War department. They are eager to expand our southern presence. Move some percentage points for 15 percent of their annual gross, and Anastasia can permit the establishment of a Jurgena Committee.”
Kal soured, “It almost seems cruel, they are supplicating us, perhaps old power kindness would work better.”
Kay moved with strength “They remain naive, if they mean happily it just ensures we can have an increasingly larger slice of the cake that sits on this land. Now, its been 90 seconds, perhaps we should resume normal conversation.”
The couple returned to their original position. Kay spoke for her husband, who seemed to be transmitting a signal to a robot nearby.
“It would be a pleasure to work on terms, Mr Goslingo, we can discuss exact statistics over tea.”
She begins to turn.
“If you would please follow me.”
Kay walked toward a table which had near instantaneously been set up by a servant droid, on the grassy meadow near the tarmac, somehow perfectly green.
Official government broadcast
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Sufet Hanno IV walks up to the a pulpit, where he looks slightly shaken, with his hairs grayer then usual
“Greetings esteemed citizens of Qart Qart Hadasht, and esteemed viewers from around the world,
I, Sufet Hanno IV, bring forth a solemn declaration regarding a treacherous assault on my life earlier today. It is with a heavy heart that I must reveal the cowardly attempt made upon my person, an act of malice thwarted only by the swift and decisive actions of the Terrorist and Insurgent Prevention Agency, known as TIPA.
As I embarked on a somber journey to pay my respects at a funeral service for a dear friend, nefarious forces sought to sow chaos and destruction in our midst. A heinous bomb, concealed with malicious intent, was discovered and neutralized by the vigilant operatives of TIPA, thus sparing my life from the clutches of despair.
Know that the perpetrator responsible for this abhorrent act has been apprehended, and justice has been meted out with the utmost severity. The insidious insurgents who seek to undermine the fabric of our great nation shall find no quarter within our borders.
In light of this brazen attempt on my life, I am compelled to announce that measures to bolster national security shall be implemented with the utmost urgency. These enhancements are enacted not out of fear, but out of a steadfast commitment to safeguarding the future prosperity and well-being of our beloved nation and its esteemed citizens.
Rest assured, dear compatriots, that this vile act has not shaken the foundation of our strength nor dimmed the beacon of our resolve. Qart Qart Hadasht stands unyielding in the face of adversity, a bastion of fortitude and resilience that shall endure for generations to come.
In conclusion, I extend my heartfelt gratitude to the valiant men and women of TIPA, whose unwavering dedication and unyielding courage have preserved the sanctity of our nation and the safety of its citizens. As we forge ahead, united in purpose and undeterred in spirit, let us remain vigilant and resolute in our pursuit of a brighter tomorrow.
May the blessings of Baal’ Hammon shine upon us all”
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After this message was sent out, the security of the nation had been strengthened, mostly against insiders. TIPA, and its respective secret police like branches have ramped up their activity, propaganda leaflets have been spread around more.
And Hanno IV has been having intense fits of paranoia, causing much of his judgement to be centered around strengthening his rule.
One of the measures he has been taking, is getting rid of various politicians and government officials who are against him, by having under cover TIPA members offer them bribes, and those oh so corrupt officials have ended up having very nice relaxing hotel near the ocean, funny that they haven’t been returning since though.
Hey, so do any of you guys have any ideas as to what my main custom banner should be? My current one (Tanit symbol), kinda sucks. I want to have something that represents my nation well. I normally would draw something for it, but my hardware for drawing isn’t really working. So just tell me what you guys think would be some good ideas that I can find for the banner.
Boat.
Firstly, hosting military bases would present “Raurica with significant economic opportunities, including increased revenue, and local business growth”.” Additionally, these bases would bolster our collective national security, serving as vital hubs for mutual defense and regional stability”.” By strategically positioning military assets in Raurica, we can strengthen our partnership and demonstrate our shared commitment to safeguarding peace and prosperity in the region”. “Furthermore the introduction of Ottarrian based in Raurica would prevent conflict sparking again and it will help mend the relationship of Raurica and Ottarria”. “Additionally you’ve seen first hand the hatred for Raurica in Ottarria first hand and do you really want this rivalry to exist forever”.
Actually not a bad idea.
Fun facts [ALT HISTORY EDITION]
The Sovereignty of Axilonipunica
Axilonipunica is a nation located just Westworld of the Neopunic's nation, formed from past settlers that moved more inland and seized the Axilonian nation in the midst of their civil war, in which all factions were weakest. The nation underwent staunch reforms and by modern day can only be described as a barely functional union of states, under a semi-capitalist economic system. However, Axilonipunica has had recent tensions with their southern neighbors in the Akili Sultanate...
As the NeoPunic guy, I am obliged to say that Axilonipunica is by far the best country in that au, and Baal’ hammon def should give them his blessing to always win, unless against actual NeoPunics. :)
Alrighty, what did we miss.
I just realised your name means New New City 💀
Yeah, since actual Carthage was new city, mine means new new city
Edit: tbh, when I first saw your post I didn’t see the second new 💀
So I was explaining that it means new Carthage…
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