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ARIsyan- wrote:I'm INSANELY disappointed. I see NO policy points whatseover. Rome wails on me for being "too vague" but jesus christ this is the most vague thing I've ever read. Not a single thing is specified whatseover, I see NO plans for the future of the region besides "keeping the slump", no specifics, no details, just criticism of my campaign with nothing in yours.

Cause I'm still cooking smh

guys im making my constructive criticism of the constitution now
im done procrasinating on it (i mean it wasn't my fault i had my internet taken away from me during the weekand)

Plus Nova Imperii wrote:Cause I'm still cooking smh

are you planning on writing actual policy points?

Bruxxa wrote:People often seem to think that to be the best person they can be, they need to be some kind of hero. But truly, what does it mean to be a hero? Is it saving people? Working towards a brighter future? I say that to be a real hero, you have to put others before yourself, even if it means your own downfall. Needless to say, the current governmental situation is very lacking in any real heroes. I would even go as far as to say that there are no real heroes left in this world. Sure, there are those that help others; even work to better the community. These people are good people, and perform heroic actions. But there are none that truly stand up for the big picture. None that truly stand up to the failed society that holds us all prisoner. Until someone steps up and becomes the real hero the world needs, we will continue to fall and stagnate. There are no heroes here, friends. But there are villains. Think about that.

Warriors, merchants, priests, and proles.

The first three rule in cycles and bouts, the fourth exists as a tool to be wielded by them.

Guess which one is running our country now?

Heroism died a century ago. Whether that was for the better? Who knows.

Mushroom Gorge wrote:Vote for me if you are a true Bluecrown Keep patriot like me

The Bluecrown Loyalist Front in Callista officially endorses Noooo for PM.

ARIsyan- wrote:are you planning on writing actual policy points?

You think I'm going to tell you? Spoil the fun?

Baloo Kingdom wrote:Official Baloominati Campaign Dispatch OUT NOW:
Link

They said it would never happen…

1.) Guess Who’s Back (Back, Back), Back Again

Hey there guys, it's me, Baloo Kingdom. I’ve always said since stepping back from Callistan politics in October of last year that I would one day return. That day is today. The Baloominati would like to formally put forward everybody’s favorite Baloo Kingdom for the seat of Prime Minister this April 1st. I’m sure you’re all at the edge of your seat to find out who’s running with me this time around (unless you’ve looked at the banner, I guess), so I suppose there’s no more beating around the bush. Presenting…but wait, a message from our sponsors!

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2.) C’mon Baloo, I’m Blind and Can’t See the Banner, Who is Going to be Running With You?

Presenting...Plus Nova Imperii (Rome)! While it’s true that the founder of the Tsarist Party and Baloominati have had their differences in the past, the Baloominati has never been one to step away from trying a new approach to regional politics. This all came about like two days ago when I randomly asked Rome, “Hey, wanna do an “old guard” faction for the PM Elections?”. Somewhat obviously now, he said yes. And so, that’s how this pair came to be, and why we decided to gang up on all the rest of you. Now, to get into what exactly our platform is…but wait, another message for our sponsors!

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3.) Experience = Greatness = Free Ponies For All

Even now, Rome and I have some policy disagreements. For example, I’m pro-IOC, and Rome is typically anti-IOC, I like to focus on the WA, but Rome, not as much. But don’t let our differences dissuade your vote, dear citizen. This only means more centrism and representation in government. Not to mention, it’s the experience that counts. And Rome and I (being a duo of the first Prime Minister and the longest-serving Prime Minister), definitely have the most experience in our respective positions out of anyone here in Callista. Rome will be voicing some of his opinions on the PPC platform below. And now, yet another word from our sponsors.

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4.) OK, But Like, What’s Actually Your Platform?

Didn’t I just tell you? This campaign is meant to be a cooperative effort between two of the most experienced people in Callistan politics. The point of the campaign is to best represent the most people through the government and its actions as possible. What better way to get this done than by having (almost) polar opposites run together? And, as I’ve said, Rome will voice some of his more specific opinions below. If you’d like something concrete from me specifically, uh, how about a program for cooperation with defender regions (not in a participatory way, but in a public support way)... I think that would work. Looks like we have ANOTHER word from our sponsor.

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5.) LITERALLY 1984 FOREVER, 10/1/2022 NEVER FORGET (I’m keeping this here forever)

The following is an excerpt from the October 2021 Prime Minister Baloominati Campaign. “Facts don't care about your feelings, dear reader. Let's say, hypothetically, that the opposition wins the election. They have 3 months to rule (allegedly). Sure, let's say they have 6 months to rule. That's 6 months of governmental work that could've been redirected to making memes. Let's say the BigBalooTMStatue goes mad, okay? Let's say it wants to eat your family, okay? If the liberal left says "the baloominati is lazy", then logically, they hate Baloo, correct? Let's say the BigBalooTM has already eaten your family, dear reader. Hypothetically speaking, what could the left do about it?” - Barlyy Loaves, 2021 I'm still funny, right? Right? Right? Right? You guys are the best! Honestly, I wonder if anyone notices that I add stuff every time to this section just because...oh well, I guess it’s time to extend this section a little bit more…and now, a final word from our sponsor.

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SPECIAL SECTION COURTESY OF ROME

Criticism of PPC Dispatch:

New Embassies

5 Embassies? Really? I could get five embassies by myself in a few days. And you need the MoFA and ambassadors to get five embassies? Your requirements are okay, but really? FIVE? I expected a lot more from the PRP campaign since many of their platforms in this dispatch and their party dispatch focus on foreign policy. If Baloo and Rome are elected, we'll get double what the PRP promises.

Ambassador RP Advertising

The problem with Roleplay right now isn't a lack of foreign participation but domestic. Roleplay has been declining in Callista, in part due to real life but also because of encouragement. Before we put advertising in other regions, let's start with encouraging native Callistans and former IOC roleplayers to return to the Napoleonic roleplay. Our Roleplay needs to be sound among Callista's population first.

WA Voting Recommendations

The PRP is finally paying attention to World Assembly membership. Rhenzern made WA membership a focus in his last campaign, to which I agreed. The idea of benefits for WA members has been floating around in Callista for some time. Unfortunately, the PRP has chosen the worst idea they could've. I don't understand how nations don't realize that people do not care about the World Assembly. Voting Recommendations for two useless bodies will not encourage people to sign up. The General Assembly is powerless and doesn't affect gameplay, and the Security Council is irrelevant since Callista is neutral on foreign policy. If you want people to sign up for the WA, offer them exclusive cards, discord roles, and benefits that residents and citizens don't have the luxury of.

Government Dispatch Reform

This platform is going to be redundant in a few short days. Stay tuned.

Alliance with IOC-001AP-JR

Despite their attempts, I don't see a benefit to these alliances. Inter-Regional RP? We already do that with IOC, and you don't need the alliance to expand it to JR and 001 Alpha Prime, especially since you're already advocating for RP advertisements in regions like those. Raiding? All four states: Callista, JR, 001 Alpha Prime, and the IOC have non-executive Delegates with active Governors. Inter-regional political organizations? The People's Party already did that, and Callista has historically influenced IOC politics in some shape and vice versa. Respect for our RMB Laws? If other regions don't currently respect our RMB laws, I don't want them as allies.

Read dispatch

The only valid criticism in Rome's section was the alliance thing, the rest is incredibly vague. It feels more like a propaganda dispatch (Whether it was intended to be like that or not) rather than a serious campaign

The H Corporation wrote:The only valid criticism in Rome's section was the alliance thing, the rest is incredibly vague. It feels more like a propaganda dispatch (Whether it was intended to be like that or not) rather than a serious campaign

For my criticism, I wrote that thing in less than 45 minutes and during gym class. I want to write more but [[physics]]

Also, the 'propaganda' and unseriousness is how Baloo always writes.

Baloo Kingdom wrote:Gotta love those machinations hidden from the public eye

Very, very hidden. So hidden not even I know what I am talking about

Plus Nova Imperii wrote:For my criticism, I wrote that thing in less than 45 minutes and during gym class. I want to write more but [[physics]]

Also, the 'propaganda' and unseriousness is how Baloo always writes.

Goes to show how unprepared and rushed the dispatch was

Plus Nova Imperii wrote:For my criticism, I wrote that thing in less than 45 minutes and during gym class. I want to write more but [[physics]]

Also, the 'propaganda' and unseriousness is how Baloo always writes.

True, however it still doesn’t change the fact that policy points would be nice and Baloo himself usually includes them. Not criticizing the way it’s written, but once again at least I have a platform.

ARIsyan- wrote:True, however it still doesn’t change the fact that policy points would be nice and Baloo himself usually includes them. Not criticizing the way it’s written, but once again at least I have a platform.

You’d criticize our platform even if we provided more specific policy points. And again, I’ve already shared my opinion on “specific” policy points and campaign “promises”.

I rescind my endorsement and once again leave politics

Tidying up my dispatch on word doc rn

Bruxxa wrote:I rescind my endorsement and once again leave politics

Bro is NOT the puppet master

Baloo Kingdom wrote:You’d criticize our platform even if we provided more specific policy points. And again, I’ve already shared my opinion on “specific” policy points and campaign “promises”.

Well obviously and I understand where you’re coming from, however I believe it to be disingenuous to harshly criticize my policies while offering none of your own.

Ah yes, the usual political drama of the day, can't wait for the moment we start debating next week

ARIsyan- wrote:Bro is NOT the puppet master Well obviously and I understand where you’re coming from, however I believe it to be disingenuous to harshly criticize my policies while offering none of your own.

I think you missed the part where I said Rome and I’s policy beliefs do not align.

Baloo Kingdom wrote:I think you missed the part where I said Rome and I’s policy beliefs do not align.

Abraham Lincoln and Andrew Johnson moment

Galactic Powers wrote:Abraham Lincoln and Andrew Johnson moment

No no McKinley and Roosevelt

Galactic Powers wrote:Abraham Lincoln and Andrew Johnson moment

FDR and Truman moment

Galactic Powers wrote:Abraham Lincoln and Andrew Johnson moment

Plus Nova Imperii wrote:No no McKinley and Roosevelt

ARIsyan- wrote:FDR and Truman moment

It’s like Thomas Jefferson and Aaron Burr

Baloo Kingdom wrote:It’s like Thomas Jefferson and Aaron Burr

This feels more like a Alexander Hamilton and Aaron Burr scenario ngl.

callista needs a redemption arc

what if we end child hunger in the US by giving every child in the US a lunch but it's seasoned with Pepper X

ARIsyan- wrote:what if we end child hunger in the US by giving every child in the US a lunch but it's seasoned with Pepper X

serial killer ahh suggestion

alright im finished
not 100% accurate, but its for the convention if thats still going on

§1. Preamble

The document enclosed, by the authority of the Tsar and regional officers of Callista, is established as the sole and indisputable framework of the regional government and shall be acknowledged by all members, present, and future, foreign and domestic.

§2. Establishment of the Callistan Government

1. The rules laid forth in this dispatch shall lay out the government's structure and contain all of the frameworks of said government.
2. The government of the region shall be known as the Tsardom of Callista.

§3. Government of Callista11

1. The region will solely possess a Council of State.
2. This Council shall contain the Tsar (the Governor of Callista), a World Assembly Delegate (which will be automatically appointed as either the Prime Minister, Lieutenant Prime Minister, or the Head Justice in that order), and three other Ministers.8,10 Forgive me if I'm wrong, but I feel like this section is redundant now. I rarely hear mentions of this 'council of state', and its role is probably overshadowed by the cabinet anyways.
3. Members of the executive branch will have their own, different duties in the region.
4. A welcome telegram shall be established by the Council of State to be sent to all new members of Callista automatically.10

§4. Privileges held by citizens

These privileges listed below will only be accessible by residents through filling in the citizenship form.
1. All citizens are entitled to certain privileges, which take effect immediately upon their entry into the region and shall not be accessible the moment they leave Callista. What if you leave for a brief movement to handle affairs in a separate region? Or what if there are some other reasons as to why you wish to do this? What if you leave for only five seconds? What are the concerns regarding this?
Suggestion: All citizens are entitled to certain privileges, which take effect immediately upon their entry into the region and shall not be accessible the moment they leave Callista for a significant period of time. While I understand the concern regarding Citizens leaving, if they only leave for all of 5 seconds, they shouldn't have their status revoked.

2. A citizen is defined as a human being who resides in Callista and has been accepted as a citizen. No citizen is permitted to control more than one nation inside Callista. What about aliens /j
3. These privileges are as follows:
i. All citizens may give, receive, withdraw, and otherwise exchange endorsements freely as long as they do not violate the endorsement cap of the region. Doesn't mention anything about what happens if citizens violate the endorsement cap.
Suggestion: All citizens may give, receive, withdraw, and otherwise exchange endorsements freely as long as they do not violate the endorsement cap of the region. If Citizens violate the endorsement cap, those who endorsed them will be requested to remove them, and if they still violate such cap, then they will be pressured to leave the WA temporarily. This is only a suggestion, and one that I'm not too fond of, as I don't like when Callista pressures people unreasonably, however this was the solution taken upon in October when Baloo had too many endorsements.

ii. All citizens may vote in general elections held by the Tsardom.
iii. All citizens may contest the position of Prime Minister, Lieutenant Prime Minister, or Head Justice, before elections. Doesn't mention Minister of Roleplay. This one's pretty obvious. Add Minister of Roleplay.
iv. All citizens may express their thoughts freely without fear of repercussions unless those thoughts violate the Regional Message Board rules of Callista or NationStates rules.
4. Citizens also reserve the right to have their citizenship automatically updated based on their residency status. Nations that leave Callista for a historically significant or friendly region may have their citizenship status updated to honorary citizenship and honorary citizens who move to Callista may have their citizenship status updated to citizen. Every month, a citizenship check will take place to confirm the proper status of a nation’s citizenship. In order to remain a citizen, a nation must post at least once a month on the Regional Message Board of Callista. This does not apply to Honorary Citizens.8,10
5. A list of all of the known past and present citizens of Callista shall be created and maintained on Callista Dispatches.10 If you look on the list of Citizens, there is not one single mention of former citizens in Callista, and it is purely bureacratically impossible for Callista to manage that. The section regarding past citizens should be removed all together.
6. A list of all warnings and regional bans both temporary and permanent shall be created and maintained on Callista Dispatches.10
7. If a citizen ceases to exist, the nation must resubmit a new citizenship application before becoming a citizen again.
i. If an honorary citizen ceases to exist but moves to Callista after being refounded, they must resubmit a new citizenship application before becoming a citizen again.12

§5. The Cabinet

1. The region shall possess a Governor, who shall be referred to as "the Tsar". The Tsar will serve as Monarch of Callista.
i.The Tsar will hold executive powers and will be responsible for appointing members to the internal Cabinet after an election or vacancy.
ii. The Tsar may only use their executive powers in times of emergency. A time of emergency is defined as a raid, constitutional crisis, refusal to acknowledge election results or other situations that put a threat to regional security that cannot be handled by the elected cabinet.
iii. The Tsar must remain officially politically neutral, and is forbidden from joining political parties and contesting elections. The Tsar's vote will not count in official government election, bill and amendment polls. They are forbidden from becoming World Assembly Delegate unless it is a time of emergency. What if the WA Delegacy accidentally falls into the hands of the Tsar? Does it specify what the Tsar is to do if he accidentally violates it? It would be probable to add a clause alleging when this would happen.
iv. If The Tsar is found to have abused their power or violated this section of the constitution, a court case may be presented whereas if found guilty the Head Justice shall determine appropriate punishment at their discretion.
2. The region shall possess a successor, who is appointed by the Tsar. The successor can be any citizen of the Tsardom and, under the circumstances of the Tsar resigning or ceasing to exist, will become the new Tsar. No other person other than the Tsar can appoint a successor.9
3. The World Assembly Delegate will be appointed as either the Prime Minister or the Lieutenant Prime Minister in the case of the Prime Minister not being able to become the World Assembly Delegate. The WAD will only hold World Assembly powers and shall, under any circumstance other than the Tsar's nation ceasing to exist, not hold executive powers. Earlier it stated that the Head Justice would also be included, but it is left out in this section. So yeah, add the Head Justice section.
4. There will be seven members of the Cabinet. The duties of the members are as follows:7,8
i. A Minister of Foreign Affairs will be appointed by the Prime Minister and shall be responsible for negotiating with other regions, establishing relationships between Callista and other regions and organizations, and speaking on behalf of the region. It's difficult to determine what 'speaking on behalf of the region' is or means. It needs to be more detailed:
maybe add a clause, such as;
[clause number here]. Speaking on behalf of the region is defined as expressing what is explicitly told or implied that the MoFA should do, and what topics regarding the region they should cover that are told of them by the region's administration.

ii. A Secretary of the Press shall be a puppet nation, controlled by the members of the Cabinet, but primarily controlled by a Prime-Minister-appointed citizen. They shall be used for posting official dispatches. They cannot be replaced and will always be the nation Callista Dispatches.10 Gee, I hope no one violates their right to use the Callista Dispatches Account! (Foreshadowing)
iii. A Head Justice shall be elected by the People of Callista. The Head Justice will have the final say in legal disputes between residents and has the power to overturn Amendments, Bills, and Laws if they are deemed unconstitutional. The Overturning of Amendments, Bills, and Laws can be rejected by an absolute majority majority in the Cabinet and the Tsar6
iv. A Prime Minister and a Lieutenant Prime Minister shall be elected by the people of Callista. They will have the power to oversee the duties of all of the aforementioned Ministers, the ability to accept or deny citizenship forms, guarding the region from foreign threats such as quorum raiders, manage the World Factbook Entry and pin/unpin dispatches, holding regional events, enforcing the regional rules, ban-ject and eject nations deemed "suspicious"; and vetoing, adding, accepting, or removing amendments to or from the constitution. How does one define suspicious? Is it 'ban someone willy nilly' because you think that they're (susamogus sorry i had to use that reference). The Constitution needs to define what 'being suspicious' is. Add a clause doing so.
v.A Minister of Domestic Affairs will be appointed to be responsible for regulating the RMB, regulating conflicts between regional members, giving out warnings to members, investigating suspicious activity, and acting as an acting Head Justice in the case of a resignation of that position. Again, what defines as 'suspicious'?
vi. A Minister of Roleplay shall be elected by the People of Callista. The Minister of Roleplay will have the power to end all roleplay disputes and can only be contested by a unanimous vote by current roleplay moderators. [color=red]In this scenario, what count as a dispute? The Constitution needs to outline what a 'dispute' in this circumstance is. Otherwise the MoRp could easily shut down the dialogue they're opposed to.

5.All cabinet members have permission carry out regional recruitment as they wish8

§6. Legislations, Internal Cabinet & Amendments

1. The Internal Cabinet (which includes all regional officers except the Secretary of the Press) shall possess the ability to create bills and overturn existing laws at any time, along with propose amendments to the constitution.3 The portion in bold confuses me. Are all members of the internal cabinet allowed to overturn any laws whenever they see fit? The Constitution needs to supply certain requirements for a RO official to overturn a law, or else people could just overturn them willy nilly.
2. All submitted proposals shall be debated by the Internal Cabinet, and require a majority vote in a public referendum to pass.1, 10
3. No regional officers other than the members of the Internal Cabinet have the power to add/remove amendments. Can they remove it at will, whenever they want? (above concerns)
4. Laws are to be defined as legislation that does not inherently alter or affect the contents of the constitution directly. Not specific on what 'inherently alter or affect the constitution'. How do you differentiate a law from a bill? How do you know if its a bill or an amendment? Couldn't anything classify as 'altering the constitution'? To what degree should an amendment be permitted as to 'altering the constitution', if allowed
i. Laws are to be drafted as bills by a member of regional cabinet or a co-operating citizen of Callista who has been given permission to draft a bill. Citizens have to gain permission before they can draft? This has never been insisted on anywhere. This part of the clause should be struck out, as it has never happened before, and if enforced, gives exclusive monopoly for the administration to draft bills in the first place.
ii. Bills are to include a preamble, defining the contents of said bill, and at minimum 3 sections detailing how the bill will be enacted.
iii. Once a bill has been drafted, it is to be given at minimum a 24 hour consultation process where citizens of Callista may voice their opinions on the proposed legislation.
iv. After the consultation process is finished, the bill will be put to a vote where a majority of votes in favour is required to implement it into law.
5.If a Callistan citizen who is not a member of the regional cabinet drafts a bill, it shall be sent to the MODA for review via telegram. If the bill is found to be constitutional, it shall then be presented to the Internal Cabinet where it shall be debated upon and either published to the region for the the public consultation period or sent back to the author for editing. The Internal Cabinet must provide specific edits that they wish to be made to the bill to the author if it is sent back. In this case, the author may then either choose to remove the bill from discussion, closing debate, or add the proposed edits and send it back to the MODA.
6. A citizen's bill may be rejected for the following reasons:
i. not properly following the guidelines of the Bill Editing Proposal
ii. is presented in a self-serving manner, such as changing citizenship laws so the author may alone become a citizen
iii. being deemed unconstitutional, such as wishing to impeach the Tsar and establish the author as the Tsar of Callista
iv. is written in the form of an amendment, in which case it should be filed as an amendment and not a bill
7.If a citizen believes that their proposed bill has been unlawfully rejected or that proposed edits by the Internal Cabinet are unfair or do not fit the character of the bill, they may file a court case against the MODA. The Head Justice shall lead the case unless the Head Justice themselves is implicated in which case the Tsar shall lead the court case. If found guilty of unlawfully rejecting a bill, the MODA may at maximum be stripped of their status and a new MODA shall be appointed. If proposed edits are found to be unfair, then they shall be struck out null and void and the bill may be presented to the region for public consultation. What if the entire cabinet makes the decision? Is it the MODA's Fault only? Needs to make a statement regarding not just MoDA rejection, but also cabinet rejection.
8.The MODA must reply to a proposed bill within a week of it being sent and present it to the Internal Cabinet. If they are unable to do so due to personal circumstances, which must be stated publicly, the responsibilities of processing bills shall be given to any other willing member of the regional cabinet who must state that they are taking on the responsibility of processing bills within a 60-hour time frame from when the MODA announced their inability to do so.3

§7. Vacancies in Government
1. If the office of the Delegate becomes vacant, the Lieutenant Prime Minister shall become the next Delegate, followed by the Head Justice, Minister of Internal Affairs, Minister of Foreign Affairs, Minister of Roleplay, Minister of Recruitment, and finally the Tsar.8, 11 Earlier it was specified that the Tsar is only allowed to be a delegate in emergency situations. Does an office being vacant count as an emergency?
2. If the office of any non-elected Cabinet member becomes vacant, the Prime Minister will choose a replacement that will serve until the end of that position's term. 12 What happens if the vacant person comes back?
3. Should the office in question be that of the Prime Minister, the Lieutenant Prime Minister will fill the position until a special election can be held to replace the Prime Minister. What if both the LPM and PM are vacant?
4. Should the office in question be that of the Head Justice, the Minister of Domestic Affairs will fill the position until a special election can be held to replace the Head Justice.12 What if both the HJ and MODA are vacant?
5. Should the office in question be that of the Minister of Roleplay, the Prime Minister will appoint someone to the position until a special election can be held to replace the Minister of Roleplay.12 What if the PM, LPM, and MoRP are vacant? ANYTHING COULD HAPPEN!1!11!!11
6. Special Elections occur two days after it has been announced that the Office becomes vacant, and shall follow the standard election procedure. 12
7. Should the office in question be that of the Lieutenant Prime Minister, the Prime Minister will choose a replacement that will serve until the end of that position's term.12
what i'm essentially implying here, is that there needs to be a detailed line of succession, maybe similar to the WA line of succession.
Ex: If the Prime Minister is unavailable, he will be replaced by the LPM, followed by the HJ, then the [insert line of succession here]

§8. Impeachment7

1. Should any official be accused of any infraction or questionable action, the informant will take any information to the Minister of Domestic Affairs. The Minister of Domestic Affairs will take action according to the information received. What is defined as an 'infraction or questionable action'? Not specific. Needs to detail what an infraction or questionable action is.
Ex: An Infraction or Questionable Action is defined as whether or not an RO infringes on the rights given to people via the Constitution, whether the RO violates the powers given to them, whether the RO engages in nepotism/bribery/corruption, etc.

2. Should the Minister of Domestic Affairs be accused, the Tsar will carry the case. WHAT IF THE TSAR IS ACCUSED?!?!?! (i think its stated earlier but im too lazy to check :P).
3. Should the accused be found guilty, the Tsar or the Head Justice will be called upon to deliver the punishment.
4. Any citizen may petition the Minister of Domestic Affairs (or the Tsar in cases of the Minister of Domestic Affairs being accused) to initiate an investigation without presenting evidence against any elected or appointed official.
5. Should any elected or appointed official be found guilty of a crime, they will be instantly fired or temporarily suspended from their position. 12 This contradicts the statement that the Tsar/HJ will deliver the punishment. What if the punishment is mild and therefore they only deserve a mild punishment without termination? I believe this clause should be removed and replaced with a more detailed section regarding punishments.
i. Once terminated from their position, the official cannot be reappointed to the same office until after the term is completed.
ii. If the Official is only temporarily suspended from their position, they will return to their office once the temporary suspension expires.

§9. Elections

1. Campaigning for any elected position may only begin 2 weeks before the Prime Minister election.
i. Campaigning persons must be a citizen of Callista.2 ik that it specifically doesn't mention honarary citizens, but they could tech be classified as citizens. you never know!1!1!!!11
ii. Candidates must submit a telegram to Callista Dispatches announcing their candidacy.
iii. Preemptive campaigning is defined as announcing publicly that a candidate is seeking a particular office before the two week campaign season. Citizens may discuss the possibility of an electoral run, but they may not officially announce a campaign dispatch, any potential appointments, or ask citizens to vote for them before campaign season has begun.
iv. Preemptively campaigning results in a strike, to be logged in the warnings dispatch. After 3 strikes, the offending citizen will be subject to a court trial where if found guilty they shall be disqualified from contesting the upcoming general elections. Their strikes are reset after the general election has finished.
2. Candidates may run under any political organization that they want or they can run as an independent candidate.
i. Citizens campaigning for Prime Minister must determine and announce their L. Prime Minister.2 by when? needs to add a 'by when' detail.
ii. Citizens who are already in office under an elected office must finish the term of their previous office before accepting the responsibility of their new candidacy.5 wait so that means that anyone who currently is in office can never run for election?!?!?!?!?!1 no but seriously this makes no sense. as of March 19th, 2024, 90% (over exaggeration) of all candidates have positions in government right now. wouldn't this clause mean that they would have to finish their terms or resign from their offices before campaigning?
iii. The holder of an elected office at the time of an election will hold the responsibilities of their office in the scenario described above.5
3. Campaigns cannot be declared after elections have started unless no candidate is running. difference between declared and mentioned? what if a campaign is simply mentioned, but not declared?
4. Prime Ministerial elections will be held on the 1st day of January, April, July, and October.January is new year, winter break, i might have different spring breaks than others but mine includes april 1st as part of it. not a lot of people active on these dates. i need to take some copium.
i. If there is only 1 candidate, that person automatically becomes the Prime Minister. If there are multiple candidates, the election will be decided via a two-round system, whereas the top two candidates advance to a second round if no one wins 51+% of the vote.14
ii. All Elections will last 24 hours with the second round being held the next day for 24 hours.
iii. The election poll will be held for a total of 24 hours.2
5. Head Judicial elections will be held on the 8th day of January, April, July, and October; 1 week after the Prime Minister elections are held.2
i. If there is only 1 candidate, that person automatically becomes the Head Justice. If no candidate reaches 51+% of the vote, a second round will commence with the top two candidates advancing.14
6. For all elections of public officials, if a tie is to occur, the affected leading candidates will discuss how they want to resolve the tie.
i. If within 16 hours of the election elapsing the affected candidates have not reached a consensus, then a game of random chance will be held by the Tsar to determine the winner.
ii. Random chance games must be best out of 5 or agreed upon by the affected candidates as otherwise.
iii. If the Tsar is not present to administer the game live, then the game may be administered to another person agreed upon by the affected candidates; otherwise the game will be delayed until the Tsar can administer the chance game.
7. An election will be held on the 14th day of January, April, July, and October for the Minister of Roleplay.
i. If there is only 1 candidate, that person automatically becomes the Minister of Roleplay. If no candidate receives more than 51+% of the vote, a second round will commence with the top two candidates advancing.14
8. In order to vote, you must be accepted as a citizen no less than 24 hours before the election starts.4
i. Citizens that have ceased to exist but are refounded must submit another citizenship form and be accepted no less than 24 hours before the election starts.
9. In the event that a scheduled election is not held on the date it is meant to be held, the election in question will be held the day in Eastern Standard Time after the error is first highlighted on the regional message board.
10. The Head Justice of Callista reserves the right to order an investigation into the results of any election if they have reason to suspect election manipulation. 11
i. Upon the order, the election is to be frozen and no new votes are to be counted.
ii. If it is proven beyond a reasonable doubt that election manipulation has taken place, the election is to be scrapped with the candidacy of the perpetrating party disqualified. not specific about what reasonable doubt means. needs to be elaborated.
iii. If it is not proven beyond a reasonable doubt that election manipulation has taken place, the election is to commence as normal.

§10. Court Proceedings7

1. Any resident may sue any resident. Doesn't say anything about institutions, government, foreigners, etc. Should probably add some.
Ex: Any resident can sue any other resident, foreigner, the government or any other institution, etc.

2. The plaintiff may either prosecute the litigant/defendant themselves, or transfer the case to the Minister of Domestic Affairs; in cases of the Minister of Domestic Affairs being accused, the plaintiff may transfer the case over to the Tsar. are they required to take the case, or no? doesn't specify, it should probably do so.
3. The litigant/defendant may hire another resident to be their attorney, or proceed pro se.
4. The plaintiff or the Tsar or the Minister of Domestic Affairs, and the litigantr agai/defendant have 24 hours to present evidence for onst the litigant's/defendant's innocence.
5. After the 24-hour deadline expires; the plaintiff or the Tsar or the Minister of Domestic Affairs, and the litigant/defendant are to be given at least 24 and at most 72 hours to present their oral arguments.
6. If the 24-hour deadline given to present evidence expires without the prosecution having presented any evidence, the litigant/defendant will be declared innocent.
7. After the deadline given to the parties to present their oral arguments expires, the Head Justice will give their verdict. is the head justice allowed to stop the trial early? they've done it before. should add a clause allowing them to stop it early.
i. If the Head Justice cannot participate in the trial for any reason, then a Jury, consisting of the Prime Minister and the cabinet (barring the Minister of Domestic Affairs and Secretary of the Press), as well as the Tsarverich will vote on whether the defendant is guilty or not.13 are they allowed to stop the trial early? same concerns as above.
ii. If the defendant is a member of the cabinet or the prime minister, he shall not be part of the jury in his trial.13
iii. If a member of the cabinet or the prime minister cannot participate in the trial, they will not become part of the jury.13
8. If the deadline given to present oral arguments expires without the prosecution having presented any, the litigant/defendant will be declared innocent.
9. The Head Justice must first refer to the Constitution when giving a verdict. doesn't mention anything about laws separate from the constitution, though i believe it was implying that.
10. In cases of there not being any laws in the Constitution regarding the case, the Head Justice must consider former precedent when giving their verdict.
11. In cases of there not being any laws nor any precedent, the Head Justice will give a verdict based solely on his own reasoning.
12. After a verdict is given, a Regional Officer -- ideally the Head Justice -- is to carry out & enforce the ruling given.
13. After a verdict is given, the prosecution or the litigant/defendant may wish to appeal. - Can they be prevented from appealing, or delayed from appealing? Also, it says nothing about the HJ accepting the appeal. should probably have something about the HJ accepting the appeal
14. The Tsar will consider the appeal, and may nullify the verdict if he deems the previous verdict to be unjust.
15. If the previous verdict is nullified, the Tsar is to preside over the case.
Some things never mentioned in the Constitution.
1. Arbitrary Bans - I have large issues with these, starting with the fact that they mess up the entire process of the appeal process. You immediately get banned, and the only thing you can do is appeal. The Constitution mentions nothing about how an 'arbitrary ban works'.

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