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Next nation to post gets overthrown in a successful coup and dragged to the Shadow Realm >:]

Hello North Pacific :3

Glendwith wrote:Next nation to post gets overthrown in a successful coup and dragged to the Shadow Realm >:]

United Orange Valley States wrote:Damit

Sorry bro, but it is what it is..
*begins a coup in your nation and drags you to the Shadow Realm using my magic wand*

Gotta whole phonebook geez, Imma read it tho.

Alr which nation in the TNP is ballin’?

Glendwith wrote:Sorry bro, but it is what it is..
*begins a coup in your nation and drags you to the Shadow Realm using my magic wand*

Ahhh fudge...no wait.... Laforeia helppp ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh *gets drag into the shadows*

TheHouseOfSilly wrote:Alr which nation in the TNP is ballin’?

I put the new forgis on the Jeep…

Glendwith wrote:Haii there =]

So do you know what "ree'ing" is? Because I have no idea what that word means.

The Red Soviet Socialist Republic wrote:So do you know what "ree'ing" is? Because I have no idea what that word means.

Follow up, I think I know what it means, and I don't like it when people do it at all. If I have correctly found the definition anyway.

Hello everyone, I am going through a predicament whether to finish Destiny Fates 1 now (it'll be the shortest in the series) or to continue with no.1.
Here's what no.1 looks like currently:

The night faded as Oreh woke up, when he went to wake his parents, he saw his parents were bleeding out against the wall, with a hole in their heart. Oreh felt his heart skip a beat as he heard a voice echo out, "You're next." Oreh slowly turned his body and saw a man with skulls on his shoulders and messy black hair hold a greatsword and glared at Oreh. "W-W-What, w-w-why did you kill them?" Oreh stuttered as he backed away.
The man ignored Oreh and lunged at him. Oreh thought his life was over when Sergeant Major guarded the lethal blow. Oreh ran away in fear, knowing Sergeant Major wouldn't last a while.
Oreh jumped out the window and saw Sergeant Major run after him, "Master Oreh, I'm meant to protect you, it was your parents' last wish." Oreh kept running but he was not prepared to run this early on in the morning and tripped on a rock. Sergeant Major stopped and held Oreh, but the mysterious figure was still chasing them now armed with a crossbow, "I will never let you run away that easily!" The figure shouted as he shot Sergeant Major's back. Everything went black.

As Oreh opened his eyes, he saw Sergeant Major too laying down on a log, the mysterious figure was nowhere to be seen. Oreh sat up and saw an old lady sitting by a campfire, "Oh, you're finally awake boy. Want some dinner?" The old lady smiled warmly as she held a plate of kebabs on a wooden table near where Sergeant Major was. Oreh sat up, "Yes please, what is your name Miss?" Oreh replied smiling. The old lady smiled, "I am Imelda, but you can call me Aunty Imelda. How about you Sonny?" Oreh got up and sat at the table, "I am Oreh." Oreh replied. Aunty Imelda sat at the table and had her own plate of kebabs. Sergeant Major was now waking up. Sergeant Major looked around, "Where are we?" Sergeant Major questioned Aunty Imelda. "You are in the outskirts of Caltos Kingdom." Aunty Imelda replied as she held her shaking finger at the gate of Caltos Kingdom. Sergeant Major appeared relieved, as he looked at Oreh, he saw Oreh in shock, "What's the matter Master Oreh?" Sergeant Major carefully asked Oreh. Oreh looked at Sergeant Major with a tear, "That figure who tries killing us will be able to take the crown and become king of Caltos. He'll be unstoppable!" Oreh exclaimed in worry. Sergeant Major rubbed his finger to his head, "There was nothing we could have done, he nearly killed us both, now we can eat, okay?" Sergeant Major replied with an informative look. As Sergeant Major sat down to have his plate of kebabs, Aunty Imelda already finished her's. Oreh and Sergeant Major decided to eat their kebabs and then ponder on how to take the figure down. As they pondered, dark rose and they decided to rest for the night.

Meanwhile, back at Caltos
The mysterious figure was convincing all of Caltos that Oreh and Sergeant Major killed the king and queen, aka Oreh's parents. "We must fight together! Avenge the king and queen, kill Oreh and Sergeant Major! If anyone sides with them, cast them out, kill them." The mysterious figure announced charismatically. A civilian raised their hand. "Yes?" The mysterious figure questioned. The civilian took a deep breath, "How do we know they killed the king and queen?" The civilian questioned. The mysterious figure smiled, "I know, you need evidence, but my evidence is Oreh left his sword at his parents' corpses, it's bloodied too. Wanna look?" The mysterious figure replied. The civilian sat back down. The mysterious figure looked at the barracks, "To hunt them down, I've assembled the finest fighters across various races." The mysterious figure pointed at the barracks as 7 warriors walked out of the barracks. "Just seven?" A civilian questioned. Another civilian tapper their shoulder and the 7 warriors became at least a million, tens of millions, hundreds of millions. And 7 fully armed fighters who had a menacing aura, almost as if they were superpowered. The mysterious figure smiled, "With these allies, OREH AND SERGEANT MAJOR WILL BECOME AFTERTHOUGHTS!!!" The mysterious figure chanted. The civilians celebrated heavily at the thought that Oreh and Sergeant Major can't return. "Although, if I find them, I will kill them myself. They either due by me, or by our warriors." The mysterious figure followed up with. The mysterious figure waved goodbye to the civilians as he went back to his castle and the other civilians went to their works and houses.

Oreh had woken up, with a tear in his eyes. "I think the guy who tried killing us is making sure we won't return." Oreh worried. Sergeant Major walked over to Oreh, "Listen here master Oreh, if he makes sure we can't enter, then we need to make sure he and his minions can't leave." Sergeant Major replied with determination. Aunty Imelda walked over to the two, "The new king sounds like a coward!" Aunty Imelda joined in. Sergeant Major looked at Aunty Imelda warmly, "We know he isn't, he chased us both down, killed Oreh's parents, and uses a greatsword." Sergeant Major replied with warmth. Aunty Imelda laughed, "That's the thing, he uses a greatsword, they are lethal. Cowards don't always hide, they tend to get the battle as short as possible, he is a coward, all his weapons are lethal. True warriors use weapons that aren't typically lethal and make them lethal, like a stick or the hilt of a sword." Aunty Imelda advised. Sergeant Major thought to himself, "He may actually be a coward." Oreh looked around for a weapon. Aunty Imelda gave both Oreh and Sergeant Major a stick. Suddenly, they heard a few warriors come to them. Aunty Imelda pulled out her campsite towel and started beating the warriors up with it. Sergeant Major rushed into battle with his stick and jabbed a warrior, only for the warrior to retaliate with a rapier. Oreh decided to help Sergeant Major and jabbed the warrior's eye with a stick. As they kept fighting, a warrior lunged at Aunty Imelda only for the latter to whip them with her towel, securing victory.
Aunty Imelda looked at Sergeant Major, "We're going to be hunted, best to find another place to hide." Sergeant Major nodded and looked at Oreh, "Master Oreh, we need to find another place to hide." Oreh nodded and ran to a nearby town. Sergeant Major followed but Aunty Imelda proceeded to whip the warriors with her towel. "Don't worry sonnies, I wouldn't die to cowards." Aunty Imelda warmly smiled to Sergeant Major and Oreh. As Oreh and Sergeant Major continued running, Sergeant Major let out a shriek in agonising pain. Oreh whipped his body around to look at Sergeant Major. The mysterious figure had his greatsword lodged into Sergeant Major's arm, causing the latter to bleed heavily. "Sergeant Major!" Oreh shouted. The mysterious figure glared at Oreh, "Major has sinned significantly, you are a fool to support him." The mysterious figure explained. Oreh tensed his knuckles and shouted at the mysterious figure, "HE SAVED MY LIFE!!!" The mysterious figure sighed, "I saved yours too, I saved everyone's life, but I didn't get credit, I got forgotten. Now, Oreh, leave while I punish Major for his sins, I'm giving you a choice, escape with your life, or try saving a criminal and die, what do you choose?" The mysterious figure seemed calm. Sergeant Major spat blood, "Master Oreh... Run... I was... Tasked to protect... You... I won't die... Not yet." Sergeant Major started smiling despite his major injuries. Oreh's eyes watered, "Okay. If we don't get to meet again, remember... Everytime you saved me, I felt a sense of optimism. Thank you." Oreh smiled through tears before running off. "Oreh, don't cry, I won't die..." Sergeant Major smiled. The mysterious figure fake crowd, "How poetic, how sweet, you say you won't die, but fate is inescapable. Sometimes you don't get a say, you can't control it. But, in an open area like this, people will try saving you. I'll take you to the dungeon. Cavalry, get him." The mysterious figure ranted. Aunty Imelda saw the mysterious figure and ran to him. "Hands off him, coward!" Aunty Imelda lashed out on the mysterious figure. The mysterious figure looked at Aunty Imelda and pointed his greatsword at her, "Imelda, you're no Saint either, you evaded taxes, and when the disease came around, YOU spreaded it, that is why we casted you out. You didn't care for other lives, you spreaded the disease, suppose you are one." The mysterious figure calmly stated at Aunty Imelda. Aunty Imelda took a deep breath, "I know I wasn't the greatest, and yes I spreaded the disease but-" Aunty Imelda sighed before being interrupted by the mysterious figure. The mysterious figure smirked, "You admit it. Time to lock the two of you up, CAVALRY!!!" The cavalry charged in and handcuffed Aunty Imelda and Sergeant Major, taking them to a dungeon.
To Be Continued In Number 2!

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Darkrise wrote:Hello everyone, I am going through a predicament whether to finish Destiny Fates 1 now (it'll be the shortest in the series) or to continue with no.1.
Here's what no.1 looks like currently:
The night faded as Oreh woke up, when he went to wake his parents, he saw his parents were bleeding out against the wall, with a hole in their heart. Oreh felt his heart skip a beat as he heard a voice echo out, "You're next." Oreh slowly turned his body and saw a man with skulls on his shoulders and messy black hair hold a greatsword and glared at Oreh. "W-W-What, w-w-why did you kill them?" Oreh stuttered as he backed away.
The man ignored Oreh and lunged at him. Oreh thought his life was over when Sergeant Major guarded the lethal blow. Oreh ran away in fear, knowing Sergeant Major wouldn't last a while.
Oreh jumped out the window and saw Sergeant Major run after him, "Master Oreh, I'm meant to protect you, it was your parents' last wish." Oreh kept running but he was not prepared to run this early on in the morning and tripped on a rock. Sergeant Major stopped and held Oreh, but the mysterious figure was still chasing them now armed with a crossbow, "I will never let you run away that easily!" The figure shouted as he shot Sergeant Major's back. Everything went black.

As Oreh opened his eyes, he saw Sergeant Major too laying down on a log, the mysterious figure was nowhere to be seen. Oreh sat up and saw an old lady sitting by a campfire, "Oh, you're finally awake boy. Want some dinner?" The old lady smiled warmly as she held a plate of kebabs on a wooden table near where Sergeant Major was. Oreh sat up, "Yes please, what is your name Miss?" Oreh replied smiling. The old lady smiled, "I am Imelda, but you can call me Aunty Imelda. How about you Sonny?" Oreh got up and sat at the table, "I am Oreh." Oreh replied. Aunty Imelda sat at the table and had her own plate of kebabs. Sergeant Major was now waking up. Sergeant Major looked around, "Where are we?" Sergeant Major questioned Aunty Imelda. "You are in the outskirts of Caltos Kingdom." Aunty Imelda replied as she held her shaking finger at the gate of Caltos Kingdom. Sergeant Major appeared relieved, as he looked at Oreh, he saw Oreh in shock, "What's the matter Master Oreh?" Sergeant Major carefully asked Oreh. Oreh looked at Sergeant Major with a tear, "That figure who tries killing us will be able to take the crown and become king of Caltos. He'll be unstoppable!" Oreh exclaimed in worry. Sergeant Major rubbed his finger to his head, "There was nothing we could have done, he nearly killed us both, now we can eat, okay?" Sergeant Major replied with an informative look. As Sergeant Major sat down to have his plate of kebabs, Aunty Imelda already finished her's. Oreh and Sergeant Major decided to eat their kebabs and then ponder on how to take the figure down. As they pondered, dark rose and they decided to rest for the night.

Meanwhile, back at Caltos
The mysterious figure was convincing all of Caltos that Oreh and Sergeant Major killed the king and queen, aka Oreh's parents. "We must fight together! Avenge the king and queen, kill Oreh and Sergeant Major! If anyone sides with them, cast them out, kill them." The mysterious figure announced charismatically. A civilian raised their hand. "Yes?" The mysterious figure questioned. The civilian took a deep breath, "How do we know they killed the king and queen?" The civilian questioned. The mysterious figure smiled, "I know, you need evidence, but my evidence is Oreh left his sword at his parents' corpses, it's bloodied too. Wanna look?" The mysterious figure replied. The civilian sat back down. The mysterious figure looked at the barracks, "To hunt them down, I've assembled the finest fighters across various races." The mysterious figure pointed at the barracks as 7 warriors walked out of the barracks. "Just seven?" A civilian questioned. Another civilian tapper their shoulder and the 7 warriors became at least a million, tens of millions, hundreds of millions. And 7 fully armed fighters who had a menacing aura, almost as if they were superpowered. The mysterious figure smiled, "With these allies, OREH AND SERGEANT MAJOR WILL BECOME AFTERTHOUGHTS!!!" The mysterious figure chanted. The civilians celebrated heavily at the thought that Oreh and Sergeant Major can't return. "Although, if I find them, I will kill them myself. They either due by me, or by our warriors." The mysterious figure followed up with. The mysterious figure waved goodbye to the civilians as he went back to his castle and the other civilians went to their works and houses.

Oreh had woken up, with a tear in his eyes. "I think the guy who tried killing us is making sure we won't return." Oreh worried. Sergeant Major walked over to Oreh, "Listen here master Oreh, if he makes sure we can't enter, then we need to make sure he and his minions can't leave." Sergeant Major replied with determination. Aunty Imelda walked over to the two, "The new king sounds like a coward!" Aunty Imelda joined in. Sergeant Major looked at Aunty Imelda warmly, "We know he isn't, he chased us both down, killed Oreh's parents, and uses a greatsword." Sergeant Major replied with warmth. Aunty Imelda laughed, "That's the thing, he uses a greatsword, they are lethal. Cowards don't always hide, they tend to get the battle as short as possible, he is a coward, all his weapons are lethal. True warriors use weapons that aren't typically lethal and make them lethal, like a stick or the hilt of a sword." Aunty Imelda advised. Sergeant Major thought to himself, "He may actually be a coward." Oreh looked around for a weapon. Aunty Imelda gave both Oreh and Sergeant Major a stick. Suddenly, they heard a few warriors come to them. Aunty Imelda pulled out her campsite towel and started beating the warriors up with it. Sergeant Major rushed into battle with his stick and jabbed a warrior, only for the warrior to retaliate with a rapier. Oreh decided to help Sergeant Major and jabbed the warrior's eye with a stick. As they kept fighting, a warrior lunged at Aunty Imelda only for the latter to whip them with her towel, securing victory.
Aunty Imelda looked at Sergeant Major, "We're going to be hunted, best to find another place to hide." Sergeant Major nodded and looked at Oreh, "Master Oreh, we need to find another place to hide." Oreh nodded and ran to a nearby town. Sergeant Major followed but Aunty Imelda proceeded to whip the warriors with her towel. "Don't worry sonnies, I wouldn't die to cowards." Aunty Imelda warmly smiled to Sergeant Major and Oreh. As Oreh and Sergeant Major continued running, Sergeant Major let out a shriek in agonising pain. Oreh whipped his body around to look at Sergeant Major. The mysterious figure had his greatsword lodged into Sergeant Major's arm, causing the latter to bleed heavily. "Sergeant Major!" Oreh shouted. The mysterious figure glared at Oreh, "Major has sinned significantly, you are a fool to support him." The mysterious figure explained. Oreh tensed his knuckles and shouted at the mysterious figure, "HE SAVED MY LIFE!!!" The mysterious figure sighed, "I saved yours too, I saved everyone's life, but I didn't get credit, I got forgotten. Now, Oreh, leave while I punish Major for his sins, I'm giving you a choice, escape with your life, or try saving a criminal and die, what do you choose?" The mysterious figure seemed calm. Sergeant Major spat blood, "Master Oreh... Run... I was... Tasked to protect... You... I won't die... Not yet." Sergeant Major started smiling despite his major injuries. Oreh's eyes watered, "Okay. If we don't get to meet again, remember... Everytime you saved me, I felt a sense of optimism. Thank you." Oreh smiled through tears before running off. "Oreh, don't cry, I won't die..." Sergeant Major smiled. The mysterious figure fake crowd, "How poetic, how sweet, you say you won't die, but fate is inescapable. Sometimes you don't get a say, you can't control it. But, in an open area like this, people will try saving you. I'll take you to the dungeon. Cavalry, get him." The mysterious figure ranted. Aunty Imelda saw the mysterious figure and ran to him. "Hands off him, coward!" Aunty Imelda lashed out on the mysterious figure. The mysterious figure looked at Aunty Imelda and pointed his greatsword at her, "Imelda, you're no Saint either, you evaded taxes, and when the disease came around, YOU spreaded it, that is why we casted you out. You didn't care for other lives, you spreaded the disease, suppose you are one." The mysterious figure calmly stated at Aunty Imelda. Aunty Imelda took a deep breath, "I know I wasn't the greatest, and yes I spreaded the disease but-" Aunty Imelda sighed before being interrupted by the mysterious figure. The mysterious figure smirked, "You admit it. Time to lock the two of you up, CAVALRY!!!" The cavalry charged in and handcuffed Aunty Imelda and Sergeant Major, taking them to a dungeon.
To Be Continued In Number 2!

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That was pretty good, I am prob a worse writer than you to be frank, very descriptive! Loved the engaging story, and the emotions were very rich.

The Red Soviet Socialist Republic wrote:That was pretty good, I am prob a worse writer than you to be frank, very descriptive! Loved the engaging story, and the emotions were very rich.

Do you think I should work on the sequel now or keep working on it?
I'm having the readers make the say.

Darkrise wrote:Do you think I should work on the sequel now or keep working on it?
I'm having the readers make the say.

Hmm a part II would be nice, Part I is already well-written.

The Red Soviet Socialist Republic wrote:Hmm a part II would be nice, Part I is already well-written.

I will try to start working on it either this week or next week.

Darkrise wrote:I will try to start working on it either this week or next week.

Take however much time you need. I need to work on this nation's lore as well. I have two other nations that I have written lore for, this one needs some proper stories.

So I was playing CoD moder warfare III. I haven't played any CoD game since i was 4.

I got 15 kills first game. Fun :3

page=deck/show_market=cards/?filter=season-4
Right now, my card is this most expensive S4 card, lol

Inven wrote:page=deck/show_market=cards/?filter=season-4
Right now, my card is this most expensive S4 card, lol

“I just wanna be part of your symphony” ahh card.

The Rise of Morell Idaski, current General Secretary of the The Red Soviet Socialist Republic

It had been four months since the revolution, a year since the civil war came to a close. Many people had wanted the famous Valdisto Menir to lead the Socialist Republic, noble as always he had refused the post. Citing that quote "My people, I refuse such a position not because I cannot do it, or fear undertaking such work, but because I am very old in age. Let us pick a new leader, a younger and more radical mind to a greater future!". So, after many debates and meeting between party members they had chosen Secretary of Foreign Affairs to become the new General Secretary, their reasoning behind this decision was that of all of them Morell had been the youngest, 21 to be exact. While sure, he had pewvent the dirty capitalist world from intervening on the enemies side and ruining the future of his motherland, he did not expect to be made in charge of the whole operation. No later than two weeks after the Soviet Assembly's meeting he found himself in the General Secretary's Building. Most of it was bare and unfurnished, after all he was the first to be the nation's first.

A matter of time had passed before Morell Idaski had found himself buried in paperwork and governmental affairs, the nation was struggling to upkeep a good economy whilst dealing with civil rights issues. The new Secretary, being more progressive than his comrades in the Soviet Assembly, had legalized some of the rights. He wanted the people to freed from the oppressive shackles of the supposed "free" world. Not many countries commented on his civil rights efforts though, all they did was freak that the new government had replaced the stagnant imperial nation of the Lego Galactic Republic. Those expansionist pigs had been all deported and removed from the Figuroian lands. Long ago they had enslaved the population here and made them construct palaces and industry to fill the Legonites greed for more control over the world. It had been the revolution that finally freed them from the last grasp of this now dead empire, the Hellstorm family had fled to the west, not caring for expanding into non-Figuroian lands General Secretary Idaski had made no further attempts to conquer the rest of the empire, though he dreamed of its total collapse. He had better things to think of anyway, like establishing trade with other nations. So he sat there in his ebony chair, signing documents of latter importance on his desk, waiting for news of a possible alliance with another nation.

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Here is my start lore for my nation. Smh, it probably is bad.

Kabarovsk wrote:Isle of Armour

Sister of battle, I what's your discord user (if you have one) so I may start an SM2 group chat (if you have SM2) with you and kurzakstan?

Don't use discord.

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